I like the use of noise sound for the percussion and thought the melodies were sweet and beautiful, however I felt it lacked experimentation seeing as it's an experimental piece. I liked when the progression changed towards the end of the piece. It turned the dream like sounds into more of a nightmare and the transition was nice. It would've been nice if you progressed more on the track, adding more instrumentation as the track develops seeing as it seems pretty minimalistic overall good work though